Four season600字作文
I like spring use there are beautiful flowers 's pretty. I can look flowers.I often play in the times I can play basketball. I like summer use I can go 's hot.I often go swimming with my family. I like eat ice cream in summer. I like autumn best. Beacuse I can pick apple, but I can't swim.I often go on a picnic with my times I watch TV on home. I like winter use I can play in the er is white and mamand sister also like winter.I often play in the snow in times I go shopping with my family.
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I like spring. Because in spring, there are beautiful flowers everwhere. I can see flowers. I can go out to play in spring. Sometimes I play basketball. I like summer. Because I can go swimming. It's hot in summer, so I often go swimming with my family. And I like eating ice cream too. I like autumn. Beacuse I can pick apples. I often go for a picnic with my family. Sometimes I watch TV at home. I like winter. Because I can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with my friends.
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