会考英语作文范文及点评：自由作文1

【习作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.

内容要点

1．四个季节中任选一个季节。

2．被选季节的特点（气候、时间、事物、活动等）。

3．人们在此季节所从事的活动。

4．作者自己喜爱的活动和感受。

【参考范文】

I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it snows, everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.

【名师点评】

这是一篇描写季节的文章，文章难度一般。要求从自己的角度描写季节和感受季节。应注意以下几个问题：

(1)确定全文的时态。此文一般选用一般现在时。

(2)除了对季节的描述，一定要有自己的见解，这是得分的重要内容和关键所在。

作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚，结构紧密。