会考英语作文辅导8:A Christmas Present
会考英语作文辅导8:A Christmas Present
一、 习作要求
以A Christmas Present为题,写一篇短文,主题不限,但必须具有真情实感,100个单词以上。
二、 学生习作
三、 教师总评
全文以 "礼物"为线索,按时间顺序正面说明了"我"的好玩及好美,从侧面展现了弟弟的好学。本文最后一句弟弟的话,正是文章的主题所在。全文想象新颖,叙事清楚。说明小作者的语言素质较强,基本功扎实。
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