1月征文:Do you want to try it?——记二零零九1000字作文
个人的
回首09年的国庆节,我是在广西阳朔度过的。去温暖的南方,对于辽宁人的我来说,这种机会不算多。当然,此次旅行我的心情也如那温暖的阳光般灿烂。
乘了三十几个小时的长途汽车,我们终于来到了山水甲天下的桂林阳朔。乘着船荡漾在漓江上,一抹微风划过我的面颊,旅途的劳累便瞬间没了踪影。
小小竹排江中游,放排人有一杆每一杆地撑着竹排。和煦的阳光倾洒在微波粼粼的江面。当时江边有出售水枪的,五元钱三个,我们便开始玩起了水枪。我举起水枪向远处喷射,水花在空中飞舞起来。突然,一济载外国人的竹筏划了过来。上面的人望了望我们的水枪,又将视线移向了远处的风景。我顺势将水枪中的水喷向竹筏前端的位置。微笑着说了声:“Do you want to try it?”如此简单的一句话,淡淡地。让我超越了自我,这是我第一次同外国人说话。
我勇敢地迈出了第一步。我为自己喝彩!
国家的
今年是祖国的六十华诞,从1949年10月1日直至2009年10月1日,中华人民共和国已成立整整六十年了。这六十年里,祖国有着翻天覆地的变化。国庆阅兵式的精彩,更是令人为之震撼。五月,恰逢汶川地震一周年。而2009年汶川的春末,早已是鲜花盛开,姹紫嫣红。中国做到了,巨大的灾难过后,人民重新站了起来。她尝试着,做到了!我为祖国喝彩!
当世界问中国:“Do you want to try it?”
中国会用实际行动勇敢地回答道:“Yes,I I am winner!”
灾难面前,我们要学会坚强。挑战面前,我们要更加勇敢。让我们一起携手,踏上明日的征途,在2010年闯出自己的一片天空。
关于我
1月8日是我的13岁生日,我八年级了。十三岁的我需要改进的地方还有许多,前方的未知世界也很精彩,我应加倍努力,更好地迎接明天。
随着旧台历一页一页的被撕掉。新年伊始,我用相机拍下了2010年的第一个日出。望着太阳的勃勃升起,未来也在我的心中写下了一个美好的期许。
努力快乐地过好每一天,将成为我2010年对生活的目标,而达到它,也是一种尝试!
谨此,留给刚刚逝去的2009。2010,我将更加优秀!我为世间万物喝彩!
辽宁省朝阳市双塔区第一中学八年十三班 朱顺昕
专家点评:文章采用小标题的形式,以“try”为行文主线,线索清晰,节奏明快。结尾处将视角从外界转到自身,饱含真情的抒情是文章一大亮点,言有尽,意犹未了,不落俗套。
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