Bob Scott is an English teacher. He is from Austalia. He works at No.109 Middle School inBeijing. He likes playing soccer and swimming. His wife is Helen. She is a doctor. He has a son and a daughter. They are in the some school. He has a happy family.
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Bob Scott is an English teacher. He is from Australia. He works at NO. 109 Middle School in Beijing. He likes playing soccer and swimming. His wife is Helen who is a doctor. He has a son and a daughter. They are in the same school. He has a happy family.
批改老師：Crystal老師
七年級:李文峯
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