when spring comes,everything is green beautrful the spring !the breath of spring ,embrace spring! in spring. the grass spit the bud , added a tracce of green for are full of vitality,grow in the arms of the sands of the birds chattering together with many flowers,flowers doo --yan. the chlidren playing in the beautiful scenery, play . embraced in the river,rows of willow yiyi affectionate,blowing in the wind,gently swinging songs, waterfowl gently jimp on it ,the water shim mering corrugated lines. let's embrace the incomprably beautifui spring!
修改後：
When spring comes, everything turns green. How beautiful the spring is! In spring, treesbegin to spit the bud, adding some green to spring. They are full of vitality, growing in the arms of the spring. Thousands of birds are chattering together. The wind is blowing gently. The chlidren are playing in the beautiful scenery. Let's embrace the beautifui spring!
修改老師：Crystal老師
四年級:李名揚
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