2017年大学联考全国2卷英语作文范文及赏析二

2017年大学联考全国2卷英语作文范文及赏析二
　　Dear Henry,
　　I have known that a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition whose subject is about Chinese festivals will be held in our city.
　　Knowing that you have a great interest in Chinese traditional culture, I am writing the e-mail to invite you to visit the exhibition together with me. The exhibition will be held in the museum from 9a.m. to 7pm. on June 15th, which will last for only one day. On that day, the works of paper-cutting artists from all over China will be exhibited in the museum. Just as I have told you, it is about Chinese traditional festivals. Therefore, in the exhibition, not only can the skills of these paper-cutting artists be enjoyed, but also you can know more about the customs of our Chinese traditional festivals from these beautiful works.
　　Time permitting, please contact me. I am looking forward to visiting the exhibition together with you.
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua
　　1. 覆盖了全部要点，使用了较多语法结构和词汇;
　　2. 没有明显语法错误;
　　3. 硬伤：主题句不够突出；
　　4. 句式套用比较生硬：例如：not only but also； time permitting…