Xiao Ming and I are good ofen read books and play games Ming is 12 years old,and I am 12 years she heavier than 's 35 kilograms.I'am 32 Ming is 1.41 meters.I'm 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming.I'm1.44 are all like drawing.
We aregood friends!
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Xiao Ming and I are good friends. We ofen read books and play games together. Xiao Ming is 12 years old, and I am 12 years old, too. She is heavier than me. She's 35 kilograms, and I'm 32 kilograms. Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters. I'm 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming. We are all like drawing.
修改教師：Andy老師
六年級:羅晶瑩
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