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I like spring best. Because there are beautiful flowers everywhere. Spring is coming. Everything begins to come to life. The birds are flying back again. The trees and grass start to turn green. I hope I can embrace the spring. Spring is so lovely, so beautiful.
修改老師：Crystal 老師
五年級:袁泉
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