修改後:
Spring is coming. It is the best time of the year. It's also my favourite season. In spring, the plants start to grow. You can smell the flowers and see many bees and butterflies flying over them. So, you can take photos of them to keep as a memory of a sunny day. The grass begins to turn green and be full of vigor. What a nice Spring! The animals begin to wake up in spring. The snakes crawl out of the caves, lambs goes out to play and birds starts to sing beautiful songs. People walk their dogs and cats. How delightful the spring is! Most people also go outside to feel the beautiful dren like going outside to fly kites. Farmers begin to sow. All in all, spring is not only wonderful but also fantastic. Let's hug the spring!
修改老師:Crystal 老師
八年級:任思盈