l have a good friend, his name is is a high school favorite color is like to play like to play volleyball with times,he also play basketball with meafter is very like to eat vegetables and frite. He is very kind,he often help others. This is my best friend,how about you?Who is your best friend?
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l have a good friend, his name is Bob. He is a high school student. His favorite color is likes todo sports. He likes playing volleyball with friends. Sometimes,he also plays basketball with me after school. He is very likes eating vegetables and fruit. He is very kind, he often helps others.
This is my best friend, how about you? Who is your best friend?
八年级:翟嵘赫
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