dream
Used to be my fantasyAnd nowIs my goalIt may not be greatBut it's my goal in dreamWhere to targetDreamIs not a Bobbi dollIt's my dreamWhere hopeDreamIs no longer a fiction idealHas transformed into the power of my lifeNo dreamHow to power
修改后：
Dream
Used to be my fantasy
But now
Is what I want to be
It may not be great
But it's my goal as sure as fate
No dreams
What to target
Dream
Is not a barbie doll
It's what I want to do at all
No dreams
Where the hope is
Dream
Is no longer a fiction ideal
Has been transformed into the power of my life
No dreams
How to get strength
修改老师：
Andy老师
修改意见：
英文的诗歌体裁，需要押韵，言简，但神需在！和中文诗歌不同，建议多阅读一些英文诗歌，然后再进行创作~
七年级:思灵
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