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Many people like spring. I like it too. Spring is coming. It is a lovely season. The weather is warm and windy. In spring, plants begin to trees become green and the flowers give off aredancing softly in the wind. There are some beautiful butterflies and bees on them. Some people like going to the park for a picnic. They are happy.
修改老师：Crystal 老师
五年级:谢小珂
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